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#34138 - 12 Oct 06 08:41 Guys, am I wrong????
Jokie Jokie Girl Offline
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well, I'm a writer of the beginner (still amatiran - ed :() I like to write something, whatever I felt...I like to write some stories of my friends..and I wrote someting to my boyfriend in bahasa and I hoped he don't understand what I wrote to him..but fact, he tried to find the translation from the dictionary...and Goshhh that's really make me sad!!!
maybe I'm hypocrite....but yeahhhh I'm sad..sooooo sad frown



here are I wrote to my boy friend:


aku ingin mencintai-mu dengan sepenuh hati dan menjadikan kamu laki-laki terkahir dalam hidup-ku

tapi naluri-ku berkata lain bahwa kamu bukan yang terbaik!

aku sedih jika harus berpisah dari kamu, tapi aku akan lebih sedih jika kamu tahu apa yang aku inginkan dalam hubungan ini..

aku butuh tongkat untuk berdiri

aku butuh payung untuk bernaung dari derasnya hujan dan sengatan matahari

aku butuh kursi untuk duduk...

selama ini, aku berusaha mencari tongkat itu, kursi itu dan juga payung yang aku butuhkan...
dan sepertinya kamu tidak memiliki

aku tersiksa...karena aku membohongi diriku sendiri!!!


love always
Lina



and here are the translation that he found from the electronic dictionary:

That's my translation about what you wrote... There's a lot of "wild guess" so, I wish I am wrong....:


"I want to love you with with all my heart and made you the man of my life

but my instinct says something else, that you're not the best (???)

I'll be sad if I must be apart from you but I will be sadder if you know, what I want in this relation.

I need the stick to stand (???)

I need the umbrella to shelter from the rain drops and sun rays

I need a seat to sit.

Until now, I tried to look for the stick, the seat but also the umbrella that was I need and apparently you did not have.

And I'm tortured.

Because I'm lying to myself!!!"


I dont know, why I wrote this one??? it was suddenly happened!!
hopefully he forgive me because I love him more than he know smile frown wink

here are for you honey:

"Je t'aime et tu me manques beaucoup".
"je t'aime plus qu'hier mois que demain."
"Je t'aime mon amour, et je t'aimerai toujours. J'ai besoin de toi, tu es l'air que je respire, le rÍve auquel j'aspire, le seul, l'unique"
"je t'aime toujours et j'ai toujours beaucoup besoin de toi"
"Je t'aime aujourd'hui Plus qu'hier Mais bien moins que demain."


woohooy jokie merayuuuuu yay yay yay
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#34139 - 12 Oct 06 08:49 Re: Guys, am I wrong???? [Re: Jokie Jokie Girl]
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Jokie -- I wouldnt beat yourself up over it. I can only read the translation but what you have written is nothing that we don't all feel from time to time. I guess the reason you wrote what you did is because you felt it at the time. I am sure he will forgive and who knows this may open up some good dialog between you that can strengthen your relationship.

If he doesnt forgive you .... plenty more fish in the sea!

Kind Regards,

Oprah Winfrey
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#34140 - 12 Oct 06 08:54 Re: Guys, am I wrong???? [Re: chewwyUK]
Jokie Jokie Girl Offline
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thanx you so muchhhh Chewww..
I'm going now to Bandung, hope I don't come late...


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#34141 - 12 Oct 06 08:55 Re: Guys, am I wrong???? [Re: Jokie Jokie Girl]
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coming to late is better than coming early jokie wink have fun in Bandung!
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#34146 - 12 Oct 06 09:45 Re: Guys, am I wrong???? [Re: chewwyUK]
D'ruby Offline
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Tongkat, payung, kursi???...jokieee...plsss deh smile

I prefer like this :
a shoulder to cry on
a shelter to protect me
a guy who loves me...

Sorry ya jokie, but people have different way to express their feeling smile
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#34196 - 13 Oct 06 04:15 Re: Guys, am I wrong???? [Re: D'ruby]
Jokie Jokie Girl Offline
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Posts: 2552
Loc: Central Jakarta
sometimes a writer made use of the metaphorical language in his/her writing

and me as a beginner, "tongkat! payung! dan kursi" it was metaphorical language that sometimes I was using in my writing

aku butuh tongkat untuk berdiri
aku butuh payung untuk bernaung
aku butuh kursi untuk duduk

in my opinion, it's the same meaning with:

I need a shoulder to cry on
I need a shelter to protect me
I need a guy who loves me as I am..

well ruby, tidak akan pernah ada yang sama di dunia ini, apalagi hanya pendapat smile
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#34197 - 13 Oct 06 05:06 Re: Guys, am I wrong???? [Re: Jokie Jokie Girl]
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Err... a bit too poetic and gombal. Hehe... But I am sorry about the separation. I wouldnt go for words like these to break up with somebody, though. Better tell him right on his face.
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#34198 - 13 Oct 06 05:14 Re: Guys, am I wrong???? [Re: Shesca]
KuKuKaChu Moderator Offline
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"tongkat" can also have a very sexual meaning smile translating it as "stick" just doesn't work!
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#34199 - 13 Oct 06 05:17 Re: Guys, am I wrong???? [Re: KuKuKaChu]
Dilli Offline
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Better tell him right on his face.

I agree Shesca, cuts out all of the bull shit. One girl told me, but then again, she also told me that she was a lesbian and that things would never have worked out. At least I knew the truth!
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#34200 - 13 Oct 06 05:20 Re: Guys, am I wrong???? [Re: Dilli]
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ok, the truth is I love someone else...:)
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#34201 - 13 Oct 06 05:46 Re: Guys, am I wrong???? [Re: D'ruby]
juminten Offline
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joki, hangin' there sayang...you're a wonderful girl, and you'll find a hot dude easily. maybe you you did??? hayo..ngaku aja!!
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#34206 - 13 Oct 06 06:22 Re: Guys, am I wrong???? [Re: Shesca]
Jokie Jokie Girl Offline
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I love his eyes ;)so that'w why I couldnt tell him directly smile
ohhh Goshhh, kudu hati-hati kalo bicara..coz he's spy on me laugh
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#34208 - 13 Oct 06 06:26 Re: Guys, am I wrong???? [Re: juminten]
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Quoting: wallet-digga'
joki, hangin' there sayang...you're a wonderful girl, and you'll find a hot dude easily. maybe you you did??? hayo..ngaku aja!!


did banget sehhh not yet, baru semi-semi gitu dehh wink laugh
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#34209 - 13 Oct 06 06:28 Re: Guys, am I wrong???? [Re: KuKuKaChu]
Jokie Jokie Girl Offline
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Quoting: KuKuKaChu
"tongkat" can also have a very sexual meaning smile translating it as "stick" just doesn't work!


you right ku wink i need a "hot stick" wink
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#34211 - 13 Oct 06 06:33 Re: Guys, am I wrong???? [Re: Jokie Jokie Girl]
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It's amazing to see how fast people want to push you in another man's arms Jokie! Is it really over with him or just a stone on the road? By the way, I'm impress by your french, tres bien! If jakchatters could read it, they would understand it's not over yet with that lucky bastard!!! Another thing, personnaly I prefer the writing way than the "in your face", the approach is more sensible, romantic... my artist side is talking now...
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#34215 - 13 Oct 06 06:50 Re: Guys, am I wrong???? [Re: Orang Kanada]
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mr.canada..dont worry, she is over it! wink the door is widely open now! so, dont wait!
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#34218 - 13 Oct 06 06:54 Re: Guys, am I wrong???? [Re: juminten]
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Me and Jokie? That sounds interesting! What do you think Jokie? Wanna try a Canadian dude? Thanks for opening the door Digga' ! Sometimes, shy men like me need a push like that!!!
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#34220 - 13 Oct 06 06:56 Re: Guys, am I wrong???? [Re: Orang Kanada]
Jokie Jokie Girl Offline
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Quoting: Orang Kanada
It's amazing to see how fast people want to push you in another man's arms Jokie! Is it really over with him or just a stone on the road? By the way, I'm impress by your french, tres bien! If jakchatters could read it, they would understand it's not over yet with that lucky bastard!!! Another thing, personnaly I prefer the writing way than the "in your face", the approach is more sensible, romantic... my artist side is talking now...


bonjour smile

you're impressed with my French??? my boy friend teaching me how to speak french wink
and I this's for you..hope my boy friend don't get jealous with you wink

"Je t'aime et tu me manques beaucoup".
"je t'aime plus qu'hier mois que demain."
"Je t'aime mon amour, et je t'aimerai toujours. J'ai besoin de toi, tu es l'air que je respire, le rÍve auquel j'aspire, le seul, l'unique"
"je t'aime toujours et j'ai toujours beaucoup besoin de toi"
"Je t'aime aujourd'hui Plus qu'hier Mais bien moins que demain."
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#34222 - 13 Oct 06 06:58 Re: Guys, am I wrong???? [Re: Jokie Jokie Girl]
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Quoting: Jokie Jokie Girl
Quoting: Orang Kanada
It's amazing to see how fast people want to push you in another man's arms Jokie! Is it really over with him or just a stone on the road? By the way, I'm impress by your french, tres bien! If jakchatters could read it, they would understand it's not over yet with that lucky bastard!!! Another thing, personnaly I prefer the writing way than the "in your face", the approach is more sensible, romantic... my artist side is talking now...


bonjour smile

you're impressed with my French??? my boy friend teaching me how to speak french wink
and I this's for you..hope my boy friend don't get jealous with you wink

"Je t'aime et tu me manques beaucoup".
"je t'aime plus qu'hier mois que demain."
"Je t'aime mon amour, et je t'aimerai toujours. J'ai besoin de toi, tu es l'air que je respire, le rÍve auquel j'aspire, le seul, l'unique"
"je t'aime toujours et j'ai toujours beaucoup besoin de toi"
"Je t'aime aujourd'hui Plus qu'hier Mais bien moins que demain."


Everything is perfect, except, if I may correct you:

"j'ai toujours beaucoup besoin de toi"

sounds a little weird. Better say:

"j'ai toujours autant besoin de toi"



Edited by Orang Kanada (13 Oct 06 07:00)
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#34223 - 13 Oct 06 06:59 Re: Guys, am I wrong???? [Re: Orang Kanada]
Jokie Jokie Girl Offline
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Quoting: Orang Kanada
Me and Jokie? That sounds interesting! What do you think Jokie? Wanna try a Canadian dude? Thanks for opening the door Digga' ! Sometimes, shy men like me need a push like that!!!


kamu mah bukan shy guy sayang, tapi malu-maluin laugh
well, are you a canadian french or canadian english? jokie prefer with a canadian english wink grin
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#34224 - 13 Oct 06 07:01 Re: Guys, am I wrong???? [Re: Jokie Jokie Girl]
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Sorry, as you see, French Canadian...
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#34226 - 13 Oct 06 07:13 Re: Guys, am I wrong???? [Re: Orang Kanada]
Jokie Jokie Girl Offline
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thanx for the correcting me ya wink



On peut dit aussi "veux-tu te marier avec moi?" laugh laugh laugh
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#34232 - 13 Oct 06 09:24 Re: Guys, am I wrong???? [Re: Jokie Jokie Girl]
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you're hypocrite jokie! why don't you try to tell him, what you want in your relation confused

do you really love him? or what?

for me, no true love!!!
so sorry to say: mungkin aja loe cuma dimanfaatin smile
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#34234 - 13 Oct 06 09:53 Re: Guys, am I wrong???? [Re: D'ruby]
Lulu Offline
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Quoting: D'ruby
ok, the truth is I love someone else...:)


Wowwowowow....you better tell me about this babe! But why i'm not surprised?! grin
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#34236 - 13 Oct 06 10:17 Re: Guys, am I wrong???? [Re: Lulu]
D'ruby Offline
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Quoting: Lulu
Quoting: D'ruby
ok, the truth is I love someone else...:)


Wowwowowow....you better tell me about this babe! But why i'm not surprised?! grin


well, I say that everytime I want break-up, it's easy wink

although that 'someone else' does not exist grin
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